As a peer evaluation, I have dediced to make it on Semih Can's blog. The reason why I have chosen his blog is we both commented on the same thing, Breaking Bad. I really love Breking Bad an d I wanted to see what Semih thinks about this TV serial.
In his reflection, he briefly described what Breaking Bad is. He mentioned the story about the birth of such TV serial. I really enjoyed his reflection and I realized that I have a lot of things to learn about the backstage of Breaking Bad. For example, I did not know how this TV serial created by his director. This story made me feel excited about this serial a lot more than before.
Semih has written one solid paragraph in his reflection. I think it would be better if he had divided this one solid paragraph into two or three minor paragraphs. Apart from that, ideas in his paragraphs are really clear and coherent. They are linked in between. Thanks to this coherence, you can fully understand what he is talking about and his thought about Breaking Bad. Apart from the number of paragraphs, organization of his paragraph is really good.
To talk about the language use in his reflection, I think Semih has done a good job because I could not find any mistakes related to this topic. He obeyed all the grammer rules and all of the sentences was well organized. Also, he did not use any repetitive words and this makes is easier for us to read his reflection fluently.
In conclusion, he written a good reflection about Breaking Bad. My question for Semih is what did he thought about Walter White when he learnt that he was going to cook cristal meth?
to Semih Can Aktepe
http://secanakt.blogspot.com.tr/2016/01/reflection-2b-breaking-bad.html
Dear Salih,
YanıtlaSilFirst of all, thank you for evaluating me. I will consider your recommendations for the next time. I would evaluate your blog, but you posted little bit late, so I had to evaluate another one, sorry.
My answer to your question is: I knew that Walter was enthusiastic about cooking meth because he attended a operation with his brother-at-law although he didn't want at first. I was not excited about the fact that he would cook crystal meth, but I was excited how this cooking was going to be. At first, I was indifferent, but the serial went on, I felt very curious about Walter's cooking advantures.
Best.